Paradise

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:09 am

If you are bored give this a spin and let me know what you think. I did this a few months back with some guys from iMS. I did the vox, bass and guitars. It is called Paradise.

http://imusicscene.com/index.php?t=audio_player&band_id=10&song_id=2525

Thanks!

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:08 pm

How do you get 79 views and no replies lol. Good bad or indifferent ???

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:40 pm

Perhaps no one is bored at the moment?

A page view doesn't mean anyone actually clicked play on the imusic player, ya know?

I give this a 7.

It sounds thin (strange, it's wide - like an 80's song, but thin nonetheless), and the drums, though distinct, sound far too robotic.
The toms are panned to far L/R.
Makes your focus shift too fast from left to right, thereby clouding the rest of the music...

Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 5:48 am

bent wrote:

Perhaps no one is bored at the moment?

A page view doesn't mean anyone actually clicked play on the imusic player, ya know?

I give this a 7.

It sounds thin (strange, it's wide - like an 80's song, but thin nonetheless), and the drums, though distinct, sound far too robotic.
The toms are panned to far L/R.
Makes your focus shift too fast from left to right, thereby clouding the rest of the music...

Thanks Bent for taking the time. I appreciate your comments and feedback. I am hoping I can have this song redone soon. We will see.

Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 12:28 am

I agree with what bent wrote. It's got potential though.. it kind of reminds me of Toad the Wet Sprocket recordings.

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