CITY SUNSET

Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:21 am

New track "CITY SUNSET"

www.myspace.com/J4Fproductions

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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:47 am

I had fun playing City Sunset and Mushroom Cloud at the same time.

I can't really comment on content, the music is so crushed from that website.

Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 2:46 am

Not quite being into this kind of music,I liked City Sunset. Although somewhat mono-tonic when it comes to your vocal. But overall a cool drone. Nice electronica. Good engineering, good mixing. Quite accomplished.

I really can't comprehend lyrics but I didn't find anything too terribly obnoxious. You see to me lyrics are just another musical instrument making musical sounds. As long as they're not too many expletives usually, I like it.

This is musically worthy
Ms. Remy Ann David

Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:58 am

Greener wrote:

I had fun playing City Sunset and Mushroom Cloud at the same time.

I can't really comment on content, the music is so crushed from that website.

Sorry about that. The videos are not suppose to play at the same time.

Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:06 am

RemyRAD wrote:

Not quite being into this kind of music,I liked City Sunset. Although somewhat mono-tonic when it comes to your vocal. But overall a cool drone. Nice electronica. Good engineering, good mixing. Quite accomplished.

I really can't comprehend lyrics but I didn't find anything too terribly obnoxious. You see to me lyrics are just another musical instrument making musical sounds. As long as they're not too many expletives usually, I like it.

This is musically worthy
Ms. Remy Ann David

Thanks for taking the time to check it out. This is my second song that I've written with lyrics so it's good to hear input so I can continue to Progress.

Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:10 am

I was able to resist pressing all available play buttons and I listened to City Sunset all the way through.
The beat arrangement is cool, the snare cuts time and sounds HUGE.
In the vocals, the two times you drop the beat, 27s and 30s. Canes the first verse. Sounds like you have stuff deleted.

It doesn't seem to Progress past the first chorus. I meant it keeps playing, but it's hard to tell.

If you're producing the beats for this track and the vocals, have you thought about using your vocals as like a scratch track and showing them to some other performers to try and get different takes on things?

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 7:12 pm

Greener wrote:

In the vocals, the two times you drop the beat, 27s and 30s. Canes the first verse. Sounds like you have stuff deleted.

It doesn't seem to Progress past the first chorus. I meant it keeps playing, but it's hard to tell.

I guess I'm not understanding what your saying. Nothings deleted.
What does not progress past the first chorus, The melody???????

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:06 am

Not the melody.

The intro is okay, the first half of the first verse is okay, nice syncopation an rhyming then the next half burns it. Then the chorus comes in, which isn't to my tastes, to much drawl.
Then the next unknown amount of verses with no real flavour and the same chorus over and over.

Maybe I don't even know.

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:34 pm

I am self taught but From all the songs that I'm listening to. The chorus doesn't really change to much.
Sorry you didn't like it Thanks for your time and input.

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:50 pm

It's not that I didn't like it. Just thought you can do better.

I love the beat, and you got flow. Just use it Smile

Have fun dude.

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