feedback about 2 songs =)

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:35 am

hey guys

my name is michael, i am 19 years old and i come from germany. i would like to introduce you 2 songs which i have made by my own. the first one is called ''The End Of The World'' (hard rock style) and the second is called ''Kommen Und Gehen'' (english: Coming and Leaving - Jazz, Chill out style). you can hear the songs if you click on this link here: http://mew.myownmusic.de
it would also be great if you could post your comment here to know what can be improved. i am looking forward to your answers.

p.s.: if you don't know where to find the songs because my artist homepage is full of german, then i can help you. if you scroll down, you will see a word called discographie. below this word you can find my 2 songs. then you just have to click on one and a new window will pop up. in this new window you need to click on lo- or hi- preview, however you want. after that you should be able to hear the song.

best wishes

michael (mew)

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:49 am

I like the second (didn't listen to the first).
I keep hearing a click which sounds like a bass drum. IMO it's a bit too much for this style. I am wearing headphones though.
Nice playing.

Oh, and please tell me the guitar IS off-centre and it's not just me?

Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:54 am

The metal track is a good exhibition of your playing, but the sound just isn't huge.

The Jazz track was awesome. I want to jamb to it.

Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:33 am

hey guys,

it is me again. thank you for your comments. i will definitely try to improve my songs as fast as possible. if you want, then you can hear another song of me. it is called ''Crazy Dance'' and it belongs to the style rock. here is the link where you can download it: http://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01HL0dNNDJFc0t4dnc9PQ

best wishes

mew Very Happy

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 9:39 am

hey guys,

i want to thank you for your answers. i am glad to hear that you like my songs. as you know, i have already recorded and posted a song called ''The End Of Our World''. but in my opinion there were some things which had to be fixed, so i would like to present you the improved version. if you click on the link below, you will be able to download it. here is the link: https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q01IRkJaYUl0Ni92Wmc9PQ

best wishes

michael (mew)

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 10:22 am

Tight playing and good tones but the sound just isn't huge. It's loud but everything is thin. Especially the kicks, like absolutely no meat at all, vegetarian kick drums?
I'm not paying you out, I just want to feel your music more. You can sure play.

What instruments are real and what's not?
What are you recording and mixing with?

Cheers.

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