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    Default PLEASE Rip this PopPunk/Alt song apart!

    I recorded this with my band about 6 months ago and just mixed it again, to try and up my mixing skills. and hopefully you guys can tell me what im missing, my goal is to get you guys to tell me its ready to be "Mastered" or as i like to call it "Loudified" haha

    http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?bjddzdyn42x

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    DRUMS are off quite a bit. especially at the end.
    Kick has almost no bass feel
    Cymbals seem unnatural. It's pretty bad.
    Bring up the lead synth in the chorus a bit.
    Vocals aren't bad.
    Where is the hi hat?

    YMMV

    As far as the song goes, what's with the pop-punk vocals and the hXc breakdown?
    "You gotta always remember the name of the game is what does it sound like? That's always the end result. I don't care if you got ninety tracks, what does it sound like baby?" - Ray Charles

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    I don't think the drums are off, it's just the drummer has an odd choice of fills, especially at the end. But yes, the crash cymbals are a bit odd and I can't hear the hi hat. Otherwise, it's a, yawn, pop...... puuuu...... punnnnn.... ppp.... uuuu.... nnnn.... (GASP, GASP), I just can't say it, masterpiece.
    master of the "angry gerbil" guitar sound.

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    -The drums are all triggered since at the time i didnt have quality mics to record an acoustic set
    -There starting to be a new feel to pop punk with some hardcore influences now, check out the band www.myspace.com/fouryearstrong and listen to there originals not covers
    -guitars anything?
    -so im just wondering what i could eq and mix a little more to polish it up, and bring it to "loudify" time lol,

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