Hi! While listening I notice the nice drum set you got on the song! I miss some of the bass lines... but I can sense it there, but I think that you may build some more weight around those bass lines! Beyond that I feel that there is a lack on the kick to! So you got the vocals right on spot, guitars are beautiful and well placed, and tone wise the song is very nice indeed! You got a nice job done in this one! Please check out those tiny but very important issues I talked earlier! Cheers!