Hi there Mister M!
Some feedback? OK here goes.
I really liked your song. Good rock 'n roll. Lots of soul, passion, musicality.
As for the sound of that crummy recording, it almost sounds like you recorded it through an SSL LOL. Great engineering! The one and only thing I would've liked to have heard differently and there was one and only one thing, there sounded like there was a female vocalist at times doing some kind of counterpoint soto voce'? she sounded quite nice (if she was a she?) And I would have pushed her up just a tad more. She's lost. Come on you like girls don't you? And it's not a girl? Push him up some more, what are friends for? Oh? That's your falsetto? Will push yourself up some more. LOL otherwise is just as great as anything else I've heard and maybe just leave well enough alone?
You know you can ruin things with improvements.
Mx. Remy Ann David