Thread: Please critique "Genuine Artical" Hey KEV, Sku

Has a nice Jimmy Buffet groove going there, but you need to better tune the guitars, it distracts from the quality of the song, stands out like a sore :-/ Attack the mike, be more aggresive to get some emotional content happening. You have this swish guitar effect (at around 3:58) that seems to be out of place for a warm tropical song, might consider leaving that out. Good pop potential, just be more aggresive on the vocals and don't forget to get the guitars tuned up. Good song, enjoyable, keep it up !

Everything that Stephen said and....

A much improved, cleaner and distinct recording too!

Much better....

Kev.

Like eveyone else said, it's a much better, much cleaner production. Now we can hear that your voice sounds like Jerry Garcia.

You might want to come up with a slighly more interesting end. It doesn't have to be anything too dramatic, but at this point it just kind of stops.

Did you clean up some of your other mixes, too? I listened to "Nowhere to Go" again, and the mix sounded a lot cleaner than I remembered it.