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What do you guys think of this?

Discussion in 'Recording' started by joorocker90210, Dec 28, 2006.

  1. Here's a semi-final copy of one of my newer songs. It'd be great if you guys could let me know what you think (both from a performance standpoint and a mixing/production standpoint).

    Here it is:

    http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/12/23/546602/rough_3.mp3

    Thanks a lot,
    Jason
     
  2. BassRocks

    BassRocks Active Member

    Hi. My first post, here (I think...).

    Performance-wise, I really like this. The piano is full, and the vocal has a nice quality. I also like the synth strings in the background. The overall mix, needs some help, tho. The vocal is real clear when the piano is quiet, but once it starts rolling things get muddy and the vocal is lost. You need to tweak EQ to push back a bit on the piano and bring the vocal forward.

    Otherwise, very nice work!

    Do I detect the faintest of Elton John's influence in this? :wink:

    - Andy
     
  3. Haha - it's funny, you're the second person who's said that. Yes, Elton John is definitely poking his way through this song - definitely one of my influences.

    And welcome to Recording.org!

    What about this one?

    http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/12/23/546602/rough_8.mp3

    Thanks a lot,
    Jason
     
  4. BassRocks

    BassRocks Active Member

    Hey Jason,

    I think this one is a big improvement. The vocal is much clearer, without sacrificing the keys. Good work. I like it.

    - Andy
     

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