mix critique Consciousless Mind

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Apr 21, 2015
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Germany
Hi all,

New grunge song - "Consciousless Mind". Can't hide the influence of "The One You Know" from Alice in Chains in this one:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3%2Fconsciousless-mind
CONSCIOUSLESS MIND
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

You hide, in plain sight
Waitin’ for your pray
Hungry eyes, gleem bright
Weak one gone astray

Unsuspecting
Creep, subdue, no
Self-respecting
Part within you

Trapped alone with your consciousless mind

I
Don’t understand
How you live
With a consciousless mind
So much you could give
If didn’t have
A consciousless mind

How can you live with a consciousless mind
How can you live with a consciousless mind

Once, in a while
When you jump the prey
Changes its profile
Exposed in light of day

Unsuspecting
Creep, subdue, no
Self-respecting
Part within you

Trapped alone with your consciousless mind

I
Don’t understand
How you live
With a consciousless mind
So much you could give
If didn’t have
A consciousless mind

How can you live with a consciousless mind
How can you live with a consciousless mind

SOLO

I
Don’t understand
How you live
With a consciousless mind
So much you could give
If didn’t have
A consciousless mind

How can you live with a consciousless mind
How can you live with a consciousless mind
 
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