Hi and thanks for sharing.
You will have more comments if you post an MP3 here instead of directing us to dropbox
I find the song to be good and well recorded.
But I think the vocals are a bit thin and could be more upfront in the mix.
Also, you've put up some very spacy ambiance and the drum could be a bit more in it with the rest of the band.
as Marco mentioned, you'll probably get more members listening if you post the MP3 directly here, using the "upload file" button located just to the right of the "post reply" button, as opposed to directing us to an outside/download site.