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Come With Me

A new original composition, words and music by Rene A.

We need as much love, and hope, and peace in our troubled world today!!!!!

Hope you like this song!

Rene

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audiokid Sat, 04/16/2022 - 23:50

Nice chord progression in this. Original too. Right on! You are different sounding and that's a good thing today! It takes talent to play and sing acoustically. Kudo's.

You definitely have a Bread sound.

If I could suggest putting more dynamics and power into your songs/ singing. I'd love to hear you cut loose more, make me feel the emotion. Even in a dreamy song like this you can still give people chills. If i was recording you I would be building on that for you.

If you performed this in concert would you sit or stand?

Rene Asologuitar Mon, 04/18/2022 - 09:51

Hi audiokid,

You are definitely an artist, and a very good coach!

I really love the Bread, and I am so happy to hear that I have their influenced sound in my song.

In a concert, I would prefer to stand up.  One can add feelings and emotion in the flowing body language.  

I need to have more emotion in interpreting songs, I wrote the lyrics, so I should be able to emote the feelings and message.  

You are very knowledgeable in music production and recording, and it really is very evident in your feedback.

Thank you so much for all the inspiration and musical lessons.

Respectfully,

Rene

audiokid Mon, 04/18/2022 - 10:06

Thanks for the kind words.

In a concert, I would prefer to stand up.  One can add feelings and emotion in the flowing body language.

Exactly!

I preformed full time for a few decades and one of the best things to help improve my dynamics was to stand and sing playing guitar.

I'd be curious to hear you sing this standing! I'm thinking a workshop section specific for sound engineers helping musicians get their songs ready would be a great add-on for our community here. You'd be the perfect start! 

Never the less... hope this helps and I look forward to hearing more music!

Rene Asologuitar Tue, 04/19/2022 - 22:14

audiokid wrote:

Thanks for the kind words.

In a concert, I would prefer to stand up.  One can add feelings and emotion in the flowing body language.

Exactly!

I preformed full time for a few decades and one of the best things to help improve my dynamics was to stand and sing playing guitar.

I'd be curious to hear you sing this standing! I'm thinking a workshop section specific for sound engineers helping musicians get their songs ready would be a great add-on for our community here. You'd be the perfect start! 

Never the less... hope this helps and I look forward to hearing more music!

Your recommendations makes sense, and good luck on your workshop.

Rene

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