Starchaser. Rock song by The Story of the Sun. Mixing feedback please

Submitted by The Story of the Sun on Mon, 05/03/2021 - 17:53

Hey everyone.

This is an original song called Starchaser. It is a rock song. I was wondering if you all have feedback on the song/mixing. We appreciate your time!

 

https://soundcloud.com/thestoryofthesun/starchaser?in=thestoryofthesun/sets/starchaser

I'm with pcrecord. I listened all the way through but found the entire track lacking musical feeling. The constant wall of sound is hopefully a dated sound of the past. I would like you guys to try playing around with removing parts to make things more interesting. Less is more.

Hope my constructive criticism help.