Just a Man Indie Rock mix critique

Discussion in 'Mixing & Song Critique' started by packrobottom, May 19, 2016.

  1. packrobottom

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  2. pcrecord

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    Hi and thanks for sharing.
    You will have more comments if you post an MP3 here instead of directing us to dropbox

    I find the song to be good and well recorded.
    But I think the vocals are a bit thin and could be more upfront in the mix.
    Also, you've put up some very spacy ambiance and the drum could be a bit more in it with the rest of the band.

    Other than that, Good job !! ;)
     
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  4. DonnyThompson

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    as Marco mentioned, you'll probably get more members listening if you post the MP3 directly here, using the "upload file" button located just to the right of the "post reply" button, as opposed to directing us to an outside/download site.
     
  5. packrobottom

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    Here you go Donny

     

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  6. pcrecord

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    The vocal sits better, good job !!
     
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    added ride at 1:30 and played hi hat for entire song. instead of samples

     

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  9. iMacCartney

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    Nice. I like the arrangement and instrumentation. Sounds like a record. Again...Alan Parson's....Well done.
     
  10. Sean G

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    Is sounds good but I can hear some type of artifact at 3:15 & 3:16 ... sounds like some sort of click I'm hearing twice at those time points.

    I played it through a few times and I keep hearing them. It may well be due to the conversion to Mp3 an uploading.

    Apart from that I like the arrangement and it sounds as though its been well recorded.

    Very good.
     
  11. packrobottom

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    no artifact i think you're hearing a snare pop
     
  12. Sean G

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    could be
     
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