Well, it's an interesting challenge to play all the instruments. But, the recording quality is just not there.
Is it the room sounding bad, the preamps quality or the mixing skills ? Maybe a bit of all, I don't know.

What I know is that it sounds very low fi and over processed. Every instruments sounds like you would record with a single mic too far from the source.

I would be interested to ear an non process mix (volume work only)