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I am planning on releasing this track this friday. The second verse & second chorus are missing but I plan to record them today. Can you guys give me some feedback on it?
Thanks!

I also feel like the recorded vocals are too low. I will probably make them a bit louder

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RemyRAD Thu, 05/03/2012 - 15:14

I actually don't think that the vocals are too low. What they lack is a little extra dynamic range processing and a bit more EQ. A little more compression will allow you to place them in the mix more effectively. Then with a little additional presence and/or high-frequency boost, it will begin to sparkle. The music track sounds rather nice for the genre and it's not screwed up. So nice job. Just tweak those vocals. You don't want to turn them up higher you just want to sit right.

Sit. Stay. Good Keyan. Wag your tail.
Mx. Remy Ann David