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Don't leave me alone song feedback

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Submitted by Fargus on

new song I'm working on.  would love some feedback.  I like the song but I'm a bit stuck on production.

This is the garage rock version.

hi res for those that care.

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Chorus acapella with piano

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Love the song but it does sound pretty compressed and lacks dynamics due to how you've processed it. Your voice really suits this and the chorus is really good. This song has great potential.

If you could get things more live sounding, wow...

 

Thanks for sharing

Thu, 08/25/2022 - 21:51 Permalink
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Fargus

audiokid wrote:

Love the song but it does sound pretty compressed and lacks dynamics due to how you've processed it. Your voice really suits this and the chorus is really good. This song has great potential.

If you could get things more live sounding, wow...

 

Thanks for sharing

Thanks for the feedback. I updated mix drums are less compressed now.  Also changed the bridge dropped out guitars and added a drum intro. Mix sounds alot better to me now. It's never gonna sound live though as that's not what I'm going for.

 

Fri, 08/26/2022 - 15:57 Permalink
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Rene Asologuitar wrote:

I love this song composition.

Sounds like music from the 70s, and yet very hip.

Your vocals are very nice, fits the song very well.

The lyrics are well written.

I love this.

Rene

Thanks man.  I liked that acoustic song you posted ever lasting love was catchy.

Fri, 08/26/2022 - 16:04 Permalink