Hi zydeceltico ! Thanks for sharing
First thing that stand up was the saturation on lead vocal. I know it's a thing but, I'm not sure this kind of song ask for it. Self produce signers often use too many gizmos on their vocals because they don't like their voice or are insécure. . . A bit of reverb and delay would be enough for me (personal taste of course)

Technicaly, the high frequencies are washed off, maybe du to Soundcloud's compression. Try to upload the mp3 here instead.
There's a lot going on instrument wise.. I'd like a quiet down part in the song, a brake down or a less busy intro. The lead guit in the intro is hard to follow.
Bass sounds nice and at it's place. The drum ambiance is very different from the rest of the band. Maybe due to the room reverb, I'd dial it down a bit if you can..

All in all very good job, like it !!

In addition to the good advice from Marco, I’d say the whole arrangement is a bit too busy, too static. Things should weave in and out more imho. I also think the vocals could use some volume automation for some added consistency.

Overall it’s a good job, it just needs more movement, and attention to details. Good arrangements make mixing effortless.