Hello everyone.
Guys, I need your opinion about my humble research work.
I'm trying to apply to NYU Music Tech program (deadline is on November 15 2012) this year and I want to present my written work about an acoustics of the concert harp in addition to my audition package. The work was originally in Russian, so I translated it to English as accurately as I could. The work has 5 parts: harp history, structure, sound production, acoustical characteristics, and essential knowledge for recording.
Since this is my first translation of such kind, can you help me to identify possible mistakes (in terms or word usage regarding the topic) and suggest any corrections?
I would be very grateful.

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