I'd probably add an upper harmony in the bridge, Rob ... and then really fill out the chorus with a dense blend of additional harmonies to pop it. Good start on this.

The really low end is a bit overwhelming with my sub on, and non-existent without it. I agree with Kevin that the vocal line needs some variation - selective harmony would add the extra interest. Good work, though.

Thanks kevinwhitect and Boswell - this one needs lots of work still in the arrangement. It’s got good bones but lacks excitement for sure.

Pretty good. Seems the stereo guitars are too loud. Vocals a bit pitchy. Song tends to drag a bit - maybe have some more instruments (keys) join in to build up each verse to a higher energy.