Nice and clear. Good job.

I'd use Melodyne on the vocal. She's a bit flat throughout. Flat singer can be related to the talents monitoring being too loud in the mix. Never the less, if you could fix the pitch a bit I think that would sound better.

I'd also turn her up a bit and reduce the reverb on her track as well.

Well done.

Did you ever remix this using pitch correction on her voice, I'd love to hear the change!