I would love some mix feedback on this tune, which is the presumed lead track for a full album project. I need to provide a bit of background, first.

The lyrics are very hard to understand. This is because the project features my developmentally disabled sister. She has Downs Syndrome and other accompanying cognitive issues. Nevertheless, she comes up with amazing verbal concepts that I am featuring on this project. If you can follow her words, they're pretty breathtaking. I am hoping to earmark ALL proceeds from this project to charities that help developmentally disabled adults.

It features my house drummer and bass player, and some folkly female bg vocalists. I'm trying to get this project ready for Crowd Funding for mastering and then duplication and then distribution. Please help me ensure the tracks "pop."

http://www.toddejones.com/songs/FantasyRealityMixdown4-30.mp3

Thanks,

-Todzilla