Well, it doesn't sound to bad but as the name stats "Adobe AUDITION", I would look into upgrading your DAW. You can get Sonar fairly cheap or PT LE with one of the Mbox set ups. Again fairly reasonable. With the mix, the vocals sound a little loud compared to the backing track and back ground vocals. You want the mix to sound as if everyone is in the same room and all part of the same performance. Frank Sinatra was always super loud and up front but that doesn't really work with today's R&b especially with lower end recordings. A good trick is to turn down the monitors super low, then turn the vocals completely down. Slowly turn up the vocals until you can make out what you are saying. The turn up the whole thing again to compare with the bass and low end of the whole performance. Also, your voice could use some compression if not using some already. Super fast attack like with an 1176. don't be afraid to compress a lot or to compress only a few DB. Experiment and do what best suits you. Hope this helps.