sonically its clean if lacking some sub-ish lows happening mix wise. I'd spend some time on the arrangement, as of yet, the song is like 'stagnant, or drony' like it needs to launch the fireworks for a couple music bars, instrument-ation? It's not recording issues, it's the overall tune just kinda needs some more, the basics are pretty much laid out, but still, intro/build/end is like straight up pop formula. if ya gotta go w. that, why not?

-kyle