Hi, I just listen your mix.
I like your crisp guitar sound.
but it's not your porpuse I think drum sound is muddy and dull.
kick and snare is not clear and I can't feel power.
other things is no problem I think.
How about this drum sound?

http://www.redhouse-st.com/mp3/sw/dummy.mp3

http://www.redhouse-st.com/mp3/sw/mudan.mp3

These are pop & funk music what I mixed.

Anyway it's just a thing that I think.