Hey thanks for sharing.. 

I'm having trouble giving my opinion on this because the sound is kinda lowfi sounding.. It may be due to the compression of soundcloud.. 

Please upload here.. we might have a better idea.. ;)

I'm with pcrecord. I listened all the way through but found the entire track lacking musical feeling. The constant wall of sound is hopefully a dated sound of the past. I would like you guys to try playing around with removing parts to make things more interesting. Less is more.

Hope my constructive criticism help.

Sorry we had some of the mastering chain off. Mind listening now?

too bright?

We can give it a shot but wanted to see if you think this is too bright? We turned some mastering plugins on.

thanks

Chris has nailed it...

It's certainly not too bright now. Listened on headphones (Senn HD600).

How does it sound overall. Still need a lot of work?