Good tune. Gtrs might be a bit loud, in line with a 90s mix where gtrs were in front of the snare. I like the cavernous drums. I hear a lot of competition in tge 3-6k range between gtrs, vocals, and snare. Could just be this phone, but it seems like a little bit of clearing in that area may be less abrasive but still rock.

kmetal, post: 462564, member: 37533 wrote: Good tune. Gtrs might be a bit loud, in line with a 90s mix where gtrs were in front of the snare. I like the cavernous drums. I hear a lot of competition in tge 3-6k range between gtrs, vocals, and snare. Could just be this phone, but it seems like a little bit of clearing in that area may be less abrasive but still rock.

Hey Kyle,

Thanks for the compliments and feedback. There is some wisdom in your critique. In the meantime, I made a remix because some of the mix balance was off to me and also based on some other critique as well. Here it is - I hope this addresses your critique:

[MEDIA=soundcloud]jonathan-linton-3/barely-alive-v2

Well done, sounds good over here.