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Yeah I don’t find
That there are any shorter welfare lines
Yeah I don’t find
There’s much a difference
After all
A wall’s a wall
... and they’re all the same

Watch the rich keep getting richer as a wider chasm grows

Yeah you think we'd all know better
All those lessons we've forgotten
Piraticians making money
... as we reap all that they sow.

Sometimes symptomatic surface
belies sycophantic service
Why assert "We are deserving"
When in fact you stole the show

Yeah I don’t find
There’s any difference after all
Both take their toll
And we wind up the same

It don't matter who you vote for because money bought their souls

Yeah you’d think we’d all know better
All those lessons we’ve forgotten
Just in case you fell asleep
The Inner party’s in control

Current symptomatic problems
Stem from sycophantic service
Starting wars can be distracting
When in fact you stole the show

It’s gotta stop
Oh yeah, it’s gotta stop
Oh, whoever thought they'd be so bold
Who's on a roll?
Who's on the dole?
Who stole the show?

Turn on the light when it hits home ...

Any/all comments, as always, are warmly appreciated.

Kev-

Comments

pcrecord Sat, 10/04/2014 - 14:28

Yet another great song Kevin.

There's only 2 things I can comment at this point. The hi-hat sounds un-natural. specially at the beginning of the song. They sound like slish instead of Tiss... Hard to describ isn't it.. ;).
Also on the vocal, some Sss could be better controlled.

Keep up the good work it's fun to follow your progress !

kevinwhitect Sun, 10/05/2014 - 15:10

pcrecord, post: 419964, member: 46460 wrote: Yet another great song Kevin.

There's only 2 things I can comment at this point. The hi-hat sounds un-natural. specially at the beginning of the song. They sound like slish instead of Tiss... Hard to describ isn't it.. ;).
Also on the vocal, some Sss could be better controlled.

Keep up the good work it's fun to follow your progress !

Thanks bud! I'll see if I can tighten the hat up ... not a big job. They don't bother me enough to tickle my ear as "wrong", but appreciate the note accordingly. There are NO effects on the drums, so that's the sound of the hat itself.

Kev-