Critique this mixing/song

Always loved this song almost a political rally vibe. Decided to use it as as vehicle to get back into music after not playing for over a year.

This is the first track for my next album. This song was a collaboration between an old school buddy who now lives in London and myself.

Alan is a good friend from our school days where we played together in a band back in the 70's.

Our old school band had a reunion in March this year where we recorded one of our songs. The song was written in 1973.

Another one from last nights set…. This is their male lead singer. I appreciate the feedback. 

I recorded this band last night and spent some time trying to mix it today…. It was quite a chore to say the least…what needs fixing? Please give me a punch list. Here’s two whacks at it

Thanks for any comments

Hi all, I am not sure if this is the appropriate thing to do. I didn't see any obvious rules or anything, so I just thought I would introduce myself and ask how this Forum works. I am interested in submitting recordings for critique as well as listening to others music. I really want to learn from others and work on my own music.