I sing wrote and played everything. Gonna redo some of the vocals (Last chorus)

rough mix
https://dl.dropbox.com/s/wkoerr4izosw1d1/EAODBIH.mp3?dl=0

fresh ears mmmm

My First Submission for critique

Diving in.

This was recorded, mixed, and mastered all in a Tascam DP32 recorder. No DAW

I hope to drop my tracks into a DAW someday.

Just me on all tracks vocals and instruments

I struggle getting warmth to my mixes. Wondering if a good preamp would help my cause

Especially on the mandolin.

Thanks

Alright. You guys were incredibly helpful with the first song I posted, thanks for that!

This is an intimate song featuring acoustic guitar, piano, cello, guitar, claps and bass.

Hi guys,

audiokid pcrecord Kurt Foster dvdhawk Boswell kmetal

Hey,

I covered this classic rock song that fascinated me when I was younger with its brilliant vocals. Of course I am no Freddy Mercury and this is by no means an attempt to match the original, I did it for fun and because I learn a lot about production and mixing by trying to reproduce famous songs.

Hi, I'm getting ready to release a digital single soon... This is a mix I did and I'd love to have you guys criticize it! Overall balance, automations, energy flow, and etc
Thank you in advance.

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Hi, thought Id post this song we did a while ago . I mapped out the tempo and
put superior drummer on it .

Opinions on , any improvements in general welcome

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new song I'm working on first listenable mix. Thoughts about anything welcome.
mix definitely needs some work. But I want some fresh ears.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/80rbqo6hpv69mor/Radio%20hell.mp3?dl=0

Hey All,

I originally posted this on reddit and in the comments a user recommended that I post this song at this site in this particular thread. Here was his feedback on this mix: